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HMS Boreas (H77)

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I've listed this article for peer review because I've been working on it for a bit recently and would like to try to get it to A-Class.

Thanks in advance, User:Thatone~~weird~~wikier | Conversations and Contributions 19:45, 27 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from AustralianRupert: G'day, thanks for your efforts with this article. I have a couple of minor observations/suggestions: AustralianRupert (talk) 09:33, 12 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

the completed date in the infobox is inconsistent with the body
- ~~This is a somewhat interesting case, as there seem to be plenty of sources arguing both ways. I'll ask at WP:RD. User:Thatone~~weird~~wikier | Conversations and Contributions 12:11, 12 July 2020 (UTC)~~[reply]
- Done following suggestions. User:Thatone~~weird~~wikier | Conversations and Contributions 19:36, 12 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
the following terms are overlinked: escort destroyer and bridge
- Done. User:Thatone~~weird~~wikier | Conversations and Contributions 12:20, 12 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
inconsistent: "loaned to the Royal Hellenic Navy on 10 February" (body) v. "Fate: Loaned to the Royal Hellenic Navy, 11 February 1944" and "Acquired: 11 February 1944" (infobox)
- Fixed to 10 February and changed citation. User:Thatone~~weird~~wikier | Conversations and Contributions 12:24, 12 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
inconsistent: "returned to the Royal Navy at Malta on 9 October 1951" (body) v. "Fate: Returned to the Royal Navy, 10 May 1951" (infobox)
- Changed to 9 October 1951. User:Thatone~~weird~~wikier | Conversations and Contributions 12:26, 12 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
suggest splitting the first paragraph of the construction section as it is quite long
- Done. User:Thatone~~weird~~wikier | Conversations and Contributions 12:27, 12 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
inconsistent: "scrapped in 1951" (lead) v. "arrived at Rosyth under tow on 15 April 1952 to be broken up" (body)
- Changed to 15 April 1952 and switched citation. User:Thatone~~weird~~wikier | Conversations and Contributions 12:34, 12 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

AustralianRupert, I have responded to all of your comments. User:Thatone~~weird~~wikier | Conversations and Contributions 19:36, 12 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Nice work, thanks. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 08:47, 13 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]