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I've listed this article for peer review because… I think it has potential for improvement. I created it 2017 and took to GA in 2018, after which I went on to other things. I am left wondering however, whether, with some work, it might be possible to get it to another level such as A class or FA. Pearl served in the American and French revolutionary wars and was present during some notable events. All feedback appreciated.

Thanks, Ykraps (talk) 07:14, 28 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Hog Farm

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Sorry to see this has set around for so long, I'll take a look at it. Hog Farm Bacon 14:49, 3 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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I'll get to the rest of the article later. Hog Farm Bacon 14:53, 3 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Personally, I think this probably passes the comprehensiveness requirement of MILHIST ACR, although you probably have a better idea than me. Disclaimer - This was only a brief review. I only skimmed it. I'd flag a lot more in a more thorough review for A-Class or FA. Personally, I'd recommend sending this one through a copy edit. The prose is rather choppy, and prose expectations are much higher at ACR and FAC than at GA. Hog Farm Bacon 01:30, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I was beginning to think that I might have to close this without receiving any feedback so thanks very much for taking a look, even a brief one. I will answer all your points in due course. Best regards--Ykraps (talk) 05:15, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for looking at this, your input has been valuable.--Ykraps (talk) 17:37, 5 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]