Wikipedia:Peer review/History of Mumbai/archive1
Hi all - I want to make this article an FA, and I request your help and advice. This Fire Burns Always 05:16, 25 July 2006 (UTC) I only made a light reading. The article appears to be rich in information. Following are my comments.
- Paint all the links blue.
- I understand that the subject of the article makes the sections organised along phases. But still, I feel that the section titles are lacking the attribute of mutual-exclusiveness. I know I'm being vague, but I'm short of words here. Perhaps I mean the need for increased specifity of titles or a different organisation. Never mind until I'm able to come up with something actionable.
- Could this be supplemented with a timeline either part of the article or outside ?
- Consider finding a better reference than http://www.touroperatorsinindia.com/Bombay/Bombay.htm I see that it's very informative, but people may doubt its credibilty.
- It needs a copyedit, of course.
More later. -- Sundar \talk \contribs 08:34, 26 July 2006 (UTC)