Wikipedia:Peer review/Honda Civic/archive1

Honda Civic

This is a popular car globally, and it deserves to be a featured article. This needs cleanup soon to make it a Main Page featured article. --Sunfazer | Talk 09:57, 13 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Some suggestions:
- Trivia should be removed, and anything important should be incorporated into the article.
- References and WP:FOOTNOTEs will be needed.
- Years without full dates should not be linked; see WP:DATE and WP:CONTEXT
- Please alphabetize the categories and the interwiki links.

Thanks, AndyZ _t 14:46, 13 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The images could be greatly improved with not too much effort.

Images should generally be of a "front ¾ view", unless they're showing the rear (eg. for the hatch shots). Generally, other cars shouldn't be in the view, and images should be cropped to not show excessive background around the car, especially if the background is somewhat distracting. Distractions like large rust spots or glare off the windshield should be avoided (often the same car can be used, just shot from a different angle).
Also, there seem to be more images than are necessary... each generation should only have multiple images if they're of different body styles. --Interiot 17:46, 13 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Take out the excessive images from the infoboxes, one image per Infobox please. Karrmann 13:51, 14 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Here are some more things you need to improve.

Remove the poor quality Take Me Higher images, and replace them with better images (Even if they are fair use) until somebody can create a better image.
The only model that has any real info on it is the 2006 model. YOu need to add info about all the generations of Civic
The 2006 section is way to long, split it into sub sections. Karrmann 08:54, 15 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]