Wikipedia:Peer review/KITE Kerala/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to know what this article lack and weather there copy edit is neede
Thanks,
Comments from Z1720
[edit]Comments after a quick skim:
- The lede could be expanded to cover more aspects of the article
- The article suffers from MOS:OVERSECTION, with many sections only one paragraph long. Try to merge these together or expand upon them.
- Merge citations that are the same, like citations 30-35. Help:Footnotes has information about this, or look at some other articles and copy their code.
- Suggest archiving your websites using the IABot. The link to do that is here.
- Many of the accolades might not be notable because they do not have their own wiki-articles. Wikipedia is not for promotion and not a database so if the award is not notable, it should not be in the article.
- A copy-edit is definitely needed, especially with punctuation. The Guild of Copyeditors might help with this.
- Are you connected to this organisation? If so, please read WP:COIE (and if you are paid by the organisation, please also read WP:PAID) and if you have any questions, please ping me.
That's all I have for now. Z1720 (talk) 22:06, 8 January 2023 (UTC)