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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to nominate it for FL. But firstly, I would like some feedback on the article for any improvements.

Thanks, Oz talk 00:38, 12 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Otherwise this will make a very suitable candidate at WP:FLC. Well done. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:03, 14 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Quick comments from Michael Jester
  • How come the Soundtrack appearances, guest appearances, and music video tables do not have ! scope="row" |? I think that's a part of WP:ACCESS. Fixed
  • For the bottom of the tables (Idk if there's a specific word for it or not), I'm pretty sure there should there not be a comma before "or". Done
  • How come you have multiple references in the table columns for some (Example US R&B peaks for lead artist singles) and some have only one?
    • Because not all chart peaks are mentioned in one reference for those columns with multiple references. Oz talk 03:26, 15 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
      • So why can't you do something like ref #2, #15, #27? Done
  • I see under-linking in the reference section.
  • Why is iMDB in the EL section? I thought that was for movies? Removed
  • Other than that, I think the article looks great.
    Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 01:52, 15 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Brief comments from Nikkimaria
  • One dead link
  • In general, too many commas - for example, "Hilson co-wrote songs for artists such as, Mary J. Blige" doesn't need one
  • Be consistent in what is wikilinked when in footnotes. I see that the reviewer above recommended wikilinking on every occasion - you can if you wish, but if so, it must be every time (except for the exception mentioned above). Nikkimaria (talk) 19:36, 20 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]