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Keyshia Cole

I've listed this article for peer review because I've recently been trying to improve this article with better information, reliable sources and a more GA-friendly type of look as I do plan on trying to give it a nomination for that later on. I really would like for someone to help me with this by telling me what type of sections or content should be made, which sources should be removed, replaced or added and how I should change the article completely.

Thanks, Fullmoon211 (talk) 03:19, 23 July 2023 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720

Comments after a quick skim:

• For guidance on what sections should be in your article, take a look at featured articles in a similar topic area, especially ones promoted in the past five years.
• First paragraph of the Career section is quite long. I suggest splitting up the paragraph. Same with the first paragraph in 2007-2009 and 2010-2013
• Citation needed templates in "Reality television" need to be resolved, and that section needs citations.
• There should usually be a citation at the end of a paragraph. Some examples of paragraphs that need citations:
  • "The song "Rick James", featuring rapper Juicy J, was released alongside "Next Time (Won't Give My Heart Away)" as a digital download in March 2014, while "She" followed as the third single from the album on July 8, 2014. Point of No Return was released on October 7, 2014, with open sales of 25,000 copies and has sold over 100,000 copies."
  • "In early to mid-2008, Cole made several guest appearances on songs such as "I Got a Thang for You" with rapper Trina, "Boyfriend/Girlfriend" with Atlanta hip hop group C-Side, and "Game's Pain" with west-coast native The Game. The third season of Keyshia Cole: The Way It Is premiered in October 2008 on BET. The 10-episode season followed up the last season following Keyshia's family and giving a look into her third studio album, A Different Me. The series concluded in December 2008."
  • Last paragraph of "2007–2009" and "2014-2017"
  • "On January 19, 2011, Cole performed the single on Conan. The single's video, directed by Taj Stansberry, premiered on VEVO on April 18, 2011, and was also released on 106 & Park later that day. The song has since peaked on the Billboard US Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs at number 27."
  • "She later disclosed that recent business disagreements had also played a part in Halley's departure"
  • "Discography" "Tours" and "Filmography" need citations.

Hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 20:30, 1 August 2023 (UTC)