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Kurkure

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Hello,I've listed this article for peer review because I think this article should be on a higher importance base. Like Doritos is very famous in the America, Kurkure is very famous in India and nearby countries. Kurkure is not a very long running brand because it was created in 1999 and thus it might not need a History section.I think it needs a revision. Thanks for being patient listeners and looking forward for suggestions.

Thanks, Komchi (talk) 17:01, 6 March 2015 (UTC)

Comments by Lemuellio

Hello! This looks like a good start to the Kurkure article. There's still plenty of room to grow, though. Here are some ideas to start with:

• Even though Kurkure hasn't been around a long time, a little history or background would still be nice. For example, what kinds of snack foods were already successful in India when Kurkure was launched? Were corn puff snacks already popular, or was Kurkure the first of its kind? (By the way, the year of origin still needs a reference; it's one of the few unsourced facts in the article.)

• How successful was Kurkure? Has it been financially profitable for the Kurkure company? If so, how well are they doing? (This is where any market statistics you can find will be very helpful. Take a look at Featured Articles about companies, like Cracker Barrel and Odwalla, for ideas on what kind of information can be included.)

Happy editing!--Lemuellio (talk) 22:59, 26 March 2015 (UTC)