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List of Canaan episodes

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I've listed this article for peer review because I believe it's good enough to be a featured list, and I'd like to get some feedback so that can happen soon. Thanks, Malkinann (talk) 05:48, 6 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Extremepro (talk · contribs)

Most FLs do not have "this is a list of blah episodes". Try "The episodes of Canaan is directed by Masahiro Ando."
428: Fūsa Sareta Shibuya de has been wikified too many times - linking it once is enough.
Choose between Canaan and CANAAN and keep it consistent.
Please alternative text to the pictures.
Pictures should not be restricted to allow for user preference.
A DVD release table should be created. Look at List of Asu no Yoichi! episodes#Volume DVDs for an example.
The publisher field of references should be filled in.
Translate the titles of the references into English where possible.
Please use reliable sources for the list. What makes the following sources reliable?

"【TGS2008】「428 the animation」TYPE-MOON監修シナリオ、TVアニメに" (in Japanese). 2008-10-12. Retrieved 2008-09-01.
"CANAAN (2009)" (in Japanese). All Cinema. Retrieved 2009-09-01.
~~"428 ～封鎖された渋谷で～" (in Japanese). 2008-09-10. Retrieved 2009-09-01.~~

Removed. Extremepro (talk) 05:57, 13 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

"AT-X『CANAAN（カナン）』7月22日より放送開始。" (in Japanese). Retrieved 2009-09-01.
~~"MOON PHASE 雑記 June 6, 2009 entry" (in Japanese). 2009-06-06. Retrieved 2009-09-01.~~

Removed. Extremepro (talk) 05:57, 13 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Amazon is not generally seen as a reliable source and refs 16-24 are from Amazon. Please use publisher's refs or third-party refs if possible.

Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog. Extremepro (talk) 06:18, 6 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Timothy Perper (talk · contribs): The summaries are imprecise and need a lot of work -- see the Talk page for some examples. I can't do that since I have no idea what the author is driving at in a number of places. I also think there's too much detail, but that may be a matter of taste. It's a good first start, but it needs a lot of work. Timothy Perper (talk) 11:03, 7 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Ominae (talk · contribs): I'll go and work on fixing the summaries, especially in reducing since they give too much plot IMO. I'm too busy attending finals right now, so this'll be done maybe next year. Same goes with the links provided by Extremepro. I remember the gpara and allcinema links are reliable are third-party; I remember someone telling me to use the latter and the former is a news site. For the livedoor blog and the moonphase one, I probably will have them removed. Ominae (talk) 02:50, 13 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]