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List of Indian violinists

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If you look at the history of this page, you'll see that I've changed it significantly. I have referenced all names, all pictures are from Wikipedia themselves and I've put them all into a table. I want to get this list to very good standard. Kindly let me know the necessary changes/mods that maybe needed to get this list to the highest rating possible.

Thanks, D437 (talk) 07:32, 18 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Stfg

I've copy edited the lede for better grammar and flow.
The sentence "Indian violinists have performed concerts all over the world and have achieved a lot of fame and success over the years" is puffery and isn't verified by the source given. Suggest removing it as it doesn't give any real information.
The references need filling out to provide more details. Just a URL and a title are insufficient. I suggest using the {{cite}} templates.
I haven't checked all of the references, but the following are unacceptable:
- FN6 (B. Sasikumar Profile): appears to be his own web page, and McAfee SiteAdviser warns of "risky behaviors"
- FN9 ("Dwaram Venkataswamy Naidu") Wikipedia page, not allowed as a reference per WP:CIRCULAR
- The following, being the subjects' own web sites (if they are really notable, you should be able to find suitable references in the articles about them):
  - FN7 (Balabhaskar Profile - Official Website)
  - FN10 (Embar Kannan - About)
  - FN24 (Lalgudi Vijayalakshmi - Profile)
  - FN31 (N. Sivanandan - Profile)
  - FN33 (Official Website of Sangeeta Shankar)
  - FN38 (V.V. Ravi - Profile)
  - FN39 (Vittal Ramamurthy's Official Page)

Hope this helps. --Stfg (talk) 16:24, 18 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]