Wikipedia:Peer review/List of notable Nashville Sounds alumni/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to get it promoted to a Featured List. I think it would do well if nominated now, but there may be some issues that I haven't noticed. Thanks, NatureBoyMD (talk) 00:51, 25 March 2009 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: This looks very good to me too, here are some nitpicky suggestions for improvement.
- I think it might help the image captions if it not only said the player's name and position and time with the team, but also mentioned something about their awards later. So the lead image could be something like Ryan Braun, Sounds third baseman in 2007, won three awards in 2008, including NL Rookie of the Year
- The header for the table is "Players" but it is right below the key where it says Coaches and Managers are also included, which seems odd to me. Could it be "Notable alumni" or something similar?
- WOuld it make sense to add the number of awards / honors to the table for each player? This is done for Larkin and Mattingly in the lead, but it might be useful to have it in the list itself too.
- Since Johnny Oates is the only "Manager or coaching staff" alumni currently listed and was Manager only, would it make sense to change this to "Manager"? Or is it there for later use if a coach is added in the future?
- I also see Oates has had his number retired by the Rangers - would retired numbers be a good thing to add?
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 21:08, 31 March 2009 (UTC)