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I've listed this article for peer review because I was instructed to do so, upon my original completion of the article, by the evaluators of it at Wikiproject Military history. I want to know what more I must do to get this article to Featured List status.

Thanks, Vami_IV✠ 22:41, 13 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments: G'day, nice work. I only have a couple of suggestions: AustralianRupert (talk) 10:29, 18 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  • I think this should be referenced: "The ship's bell was recovered, restored, and is now displayed in the Merseyside Maritime Museum in Liverpool"
  • "908 Killed, 20 Captured" --> "908 killed, 20 captured" (same for all other instances of "Killed" and "Captured")
  • for King Edward VII what ref provides "under 115 metres (377 ft) of water"?
  • " Off Lisbon, Portugal" --> "off Lisbon, Portugal" (and other similar instances when preceded by co-ordinates)
  • this should be referenced: "HMS Centurion's badge is on display at Shugborough Hall."
  • suggest cropping the caption off "File:Japanese battleship Settsu in old postcard.jpg"
  • suggest replacing "File:USS Nevada (replica).jpg" with a photo of the actual vessel if one exists
  • the External links section should be below the Notes per WP:LAYOUT
  • the bare urls in the External links section should be formatted with a title
  • there is a short citation for "Rohwer, p. 118", but no corresponding long citation in the References section
  • same as above for Lengerer, p. 59, Preston, p. 176, and Schultz, pp. 228–248
  • ref 104 "Grant" needs a page number if possible
  • "ARMOUR-PLATING-FROM-THE-TIRPITZ": the capitalisation should be reduced per MOS:ALLCAPS
  • ref 1 uses a different style to most of the other citations (there are a few inconsistencies throughout)
  • good luck with taking the article further
Implemented, thanks! –Vami_IV✠ 01:26, 19 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  1.  Done
  2.  Done
  3.  Done (researched and cited)
  4.  Done
  5.  Done
  6.  Done (Replaced image)
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  14.  Done (Removed)
  15. Thanks, I will probably need it
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