Wikipedia:Peer review/Lumines Live!/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because… I want to get this to GA status and I'm not sure if it is ready. Could someone take a quick glance and see if there are any glaring flaws that could delay the GA review? Thanks, Blue Pumpkin Pie (talk) 12:29, 1 July 2019 (UTC)
Comments from Scribolt
I've made some copy edits directly in the article, feel free to modify / ignore them if you don't like them. A few questions,
- If this is the 3rd entry in the series, why is it 2nd in the list of releases on the series page?
- I would suggest giving a bit more detail on the mission mode, what is a mission that the player needs to solve? To score a certain number of points in a specific time? To clear a screen with a certain number of moves?
- Similarly for the Skin edit mode, what is a Skin in this context? A color scheme? It's made a bit clearer later, but it could do with explaining a bit earlier.
- Yokota is mentioned with no introduction, who is he/she?
Scribolt (talk) 13:17, 15 July 2019 (UTC)
@Scribolt: Thanks for the assist. I made the mistake of putting this the third in the series when technically it was the second. I was only following the Japanese release as the original. The European release came earlier than it was intended to release. I'll fix that if it hasn't been fixed yet. Mission Mode is really hard to describe because it has a large variety of tasks. None of the sources give a clear idea. The ones I can list on the top of my head are clearing the board by making one or two moves, clearing one or more columns, clearing a set number of squares before time runs out, clearing the board before time runs out. Skin Edit mode is just a playlist mode, lets players create a playlist of skins that were already unlocked.Blue Pumpkin Pie (talk) 19:09, 15 July 2019 (UTC)