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Mediocre (album)

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A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for October 2008.

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I've listed this article for peer review because I've worked on it a little, and I feel it's almost ready to be upgraded to B-class status.

Thanks, – Obento Musubi (C • G • S) 09:34, 16 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Ruhrfisch comments: Very briefly, here are some suggestions for improvement.

A model article is useful for ideas and examples to follow - there are a large number of Featured Articles on music albums at Wikipedia:Featured_articles#Music that may be useful.

Okay, I will take a look. Thanks. – Obento Musubi (C • G • S) 01:06, 1 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

~~Amazon.com is not a valid source for critical reviews - anyone can review there.~~

Y Removed. – Obento Musubi (C • G • S) 01:06, 1 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

"No Vuelvo Más" is currently on both the "Los 40 Principales" and "México Top 100" charts, so the statistics may change every week. needs a ref or two, and articles should avoid words like "currently" (this may change tomorrow or next week). Use as of October 2008 or something similar.

Y Removed. It doesn't seem like it's going to get any higher anyway. – Obento Musubi (C • G • S) 01:06, 1 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

~~I think the Critical reception section abuses block quotes - see a model FA article on how to do this better.~~

Y Fixed. I took only the most important parts of each quote and pieced them together. – Obento Musubi (C • G • S) 01:06, 1 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Missing sections / information - needs ~~Recording and production~~, ~~Style~~, other information, probably others, see a model article or two again

Y I'm not sure there's much information regarding recording and production. I'll start working on the style section. Thanks! – Obento Musubi (C • G • S) 01:06, 1 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Y I have just added a musical style section. – Obento Musubi (C • G • S) 01:25, 1 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Y I have also added a personnel section. – Obento Musubi (C • G • S) 06:20, 3 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch _><>°^° 03:19, 30 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]