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Mega Man 5

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I've listed this article for peer review because I plan on taking this to GAN and want to see what can be done to improve on it.

Thanks, GamerPro64 21:22, 16 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by X201

Lead

I struggled a bit with the plot sentences. Had to re-read it a couple of times. Rejig it perhaps?. It was the "Takes place..." detail in it that tripped me up. Ignoring that sentence and starting with the "Mega Man's brother and ally Proto Man uncharacteristically..." line made it easier to understand.
I could be wrong but I think "whom" is frowned on by the WP word police. Need to check.

Gameplay

Wikilink gaming terms like "life meter", "Boss battle" etc

References

Ref No. 5 is 404 not found.
Ref 20 is to a "goodbye" landing page.

Summary Other than the minor things above, there was nothing that leapt out at me as being wrong or missing. The article covers details (like weapons) and stops at the correct depth before it gets too geeky. It covers development points well, and doesn't leave the reader feeling short changed. - X201 (talk) 16:37, 17 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed all the minor things raised above. GamerPro64 23:20, 17 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]