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Museum de Oude Wolden

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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to improve the article to B class quality.

Thanks, Editør (talk) 12:54, 24 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I have made some additional edits and promoted the article to B class. I would still appreciate comments that would help improving the article. – Editør (talk) 09:56, 7 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments:

I've done a quick read through of the article, and it generally seems quite well written. A few things: First, the founding of the museum. It says in the info box 1973, but it would be nice to have a quick sentence in the body establishing who founded it, and what their motivations were. Also, a general statement like "focuses on ___ era dutch painters" would be helpful in the intro. Finally, it would be helpful (though certainly not required) if you could find a reputable source in English that describes the museum, as the only English source appears to be a passing mention of the museum. I'm certainly not an expert in this area, but the article seems to do a good job covering the topic.Forbes72 (talk) 04:43, 17 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your comments.

Details of foundation: I have searched for publications mentioning such details, but until now without success. The only publication I've found that mentions the museum's foundation at all is the list that I have used with the foundation year. Done – Editør (talk) 14:12, 20 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
General statement: Done
English source: I have also searched for additional English language publications, but so far without success. Most publications about the museum are local sources, or regional sources at best.

– Editør (talk) 11:48, 18 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]