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Occlusal trauma

I think this is an excellent article about occlusal traumatism, discussing both primary and secondary forms extensively with examples provided and concepts explained adequately. DRosenbach ^{(Talk | Contribs)} 03:37, 16 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

This article has zero citations. Snottywong 19:34, 4 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 02:37, 5 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The article is brief, but well-written. However, as stated above, it needs inline cites. Also, the italicized sections are not particularly helpful. A picture would be useful. – Quadell ^{(talk) (random)} 14:53, 9 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]