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Perseus (constellation)

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I've listed this article for peer review because I've just brought it to GA, and would like to take it further to FA. However, I've been staring at the article for like 5-10 minutes, and am kind of stuck on what to do to prepare it for FAC. Any input is appreciated.

Thanks, StringTheory11 (t • c) 04:20, 24 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Casliber

Yes it is looking pretty good. I was tempted to add stats of some of the other stars with bayer designations, but then reconsidered - I think there are enough egregiously notable stars listed, and just listing unremarkable stats of more might detract rather than add...musing on this. Casliber (talk · contribs) 09:15, 24 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

NB: Not sure how much more content you want - the Morton Wagman book has alot on bayer designations etc. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:20, 17 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from BSVulturis

I concur with Casliber. All I might do here is a quibble: alter the "hosts the Perseid meteor shower" in the initial paragraph to "hosts the radiant of the Perseid meteor shower", because by the very nature of showers and their radiant points, you actually don't often see a Perseid meteor within Perseus itself. BSVulturis (talk) 17:05, 29 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]