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First time doing a peer review! I've listed this article for peer review because I think it is already very close to GA-status, and just want to try and catch out any major issues before nominating it. What with the recent release of Spider-Man: No Way Home and the demand for The Amazing Spider-Man 3 to be made, I think this article is more than ready to receive the treatment it deserves. Thanks! ExcellentWheatFarmer (talk) 21:06, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
Pamzeis
[edit]Having recently watched this film series (well, kind of, I just mostly skipped through them because they were sorta slow. And this had nothing to do with No Way Home (I'm being honest)), I'll try to have a look. Please don't take any offence if I, uh, quit. I've been doing that a bit recently because, um, stress. Pamzeis (talk) 13:20, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
To be clear, he's not my favourite TASM character, and I don't know if he's my favourite Spider-Man, because I haven't seen Spider-Man films outside TASM films. OK, let's not screw this up.
the Marvel Comics superhero of the same name created by Stan Lee and Steve Ditko
— I got confused for a minute and thought this article's character was created by Lee and Ditko, not the comics' character...them in the film itself, referred to
— is kinda clunky and a bit confusingDays after Raimi's departure
— which is... when?Tolmach, now president
— as in now 2022 or now a decade ago when the film was being developed?give sharp focus to Parker's
— what is a "sharp focus", tho?British-American actor Andrew Garfield was cast as Peter Parker/Spider-Man for the 2012 film and its sequel, with his casting being officially made on July 1, 2010.
— wh- wh- what? OK, am I correct assuming that Garfield's 2010 contract or something like that stated he would also appear in a sequel? And the big after the comma is kinda clunky...Garfield also performed some of his own stunts in the film
— anything that can be elaborated about what stunts he performed in the film?After leaked information from the hack also indicated Sony to be in talks to have Sam Raimi direct Spider-Man vs. The Amazing Spider-Man, a multiversal crossover film featuring Garfield's Spider-Man encounter Tobey Maguire's Spider-Man, as well as a new trilogy starring Maguire; and to also be in talks with Marvel Studios about integrating a rebooted version of Spider-Man into the Marvel Cinematic Universe (MCU), beginning with Captain America: Civil War (2016), a deal was reached in early 2015 between the two studios to make the latter official, effectively cancelling The Amazing Spider-Man franchise.
— das a lot to take in... split sentence?Tom Holland described the inclusion of his Spider-Man precedecessors Garfield and Tobey Maguire in Spider-Man: No Way Home 'was an idea that seemed impossible' before it came to fruition
— this reads more like something that would be in the No Way Home article. You don't have to take my suggestion, but personally, I would word it like this: According to Holland, the inclusion of Garfield and Maguire "seemed impossible" before it came to fruition. (Fine, it does read very similar...)Holland has also stated he regretted not contacting Garfield after he intially succeeded him in the role and felt lucky that Spider-Man: No Way Home had given both actors a second chance to discuss the Spider-Man character.
— ...Is this trivia?
Okie, guess I started this off. 
Yep, there was a 2-week+ delay... Pamzeis (talk) 07:41, 23 February 2022 (UTC)