Wikipedia:Peer review/Philadelphia Sports Hall of Fame/archive2
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because… It was previously peer reviewed and changes have been made.
Thanks, Flyguy33 (talk) 08:04, 26 December 2009 (UTC)
comments by --Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 15:09, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
- Prose
- You need to double the size of the lede.
- Is it a corporation or organization? Infobox is not the same as lede.
- It was founded in 2002, why hasn't there been inductees at that time?
- Images
- I suggest having an image in the lede, maybe the oldest inductee or something.
- You have to add Alternative texts to your images.
- Captions that aren't in sentences shouldn't have a period at the end. (like Ryan Howard. Smarty Jones.)
- Style
- Why isn't "Pride of Philadelphia Award" in table format? This would give consistency throughout the list, please change it.
- I suggest using Name instead of Person; and Year instead of Inducted.
- Please make the tables sortable, check also List of members of the Baseball Hall of Fame to see how it may be done.
- I don't see the relevancy of the see also section, please remove it.
- Remove the colors in the table.
- References
- You have to have consistent dates in the references, so it's either 2009-08-01 or 1 August 2009.
- The title of the references mustn't be all capital, even if it is so on the original page.