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Rosetta@home

Rosetta's goal is to develop computational methods that accurately predict and design protein structure and protein complexes. This computational endeavor may ultimately help researchers develop cures for human diseases such as HIV/AIDS, Cancer, Alzheimer's disease, Malaria and many other diseases.

Baker Laboratory is based at the University of Washington. The principal investigator is David Baker, Professor of Biochemistry at the University of Washington and Howard Hughes Medical Institute investigator, who has been elected to the United States National Academy of Sciences in April 2006. The BakerLab scientific team includes post-docs John Karanicolas, Phil Bradley, Kira Misura, Bill Schief, Vanita Sood, Bin Qian, Eric Althoff, Daniela Roethlisberger, Jim Havranek, as well as numerous graduate students and visiting scientists.

Needs to get to FA status.--Records 02:43, 2 December 2006 (UTC)

NB: Nominator has been indefinitely blocked. Samsara (talk • contribs) 21:32, 5 December 2006 (UTC)

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NB: Nominator has been indefinitely blocked. Samsara (talk • contribs) 21:32, 5 December 2006 (UTC)