Wikipedia:Peer review/Rural diversity/archive1

Rural diversity

I've listed this article for peer review because it's a recent creation and I'd like additional opinions on how it could be improved.

Thanks, Joecipsurprise (talk) 16:12, 13 November 2020 (UTC)

Hey @Joecipsurprise: from a quick read-through of the article, I had the following comments:

1. It strikes me that the article is focused entirely on the United States. I wonder whether the article should incorporate a broader world view of the topic, or perhaps if the concept is limited to the US, it should be moved to Rural diversity (United States).
2. There appear to be several statements and sentences which do not cite any sources, I would suggest that these parts are given immediate attention.
3. The Media Portrayals section is relatively large and appears ahead of the, in my opinion, more relevant explanation of the different types of rural diversity. I would suggest the Media Portrayals section be condensed or at least moved after the more important sections explaining the subject of the article itself.
4. This article is largely an explanatory article and so perhaps some images, diagrams and/or graphs could be used effectively to assist the reader in understanding and comprehending the article.

That's all I have for now, I hope it's of some help. —Ave (talk) 13:46, 15 November 2020 (UTC)

That's very useful, @Ave:, thanks! Joecipsurprise (talk) 20:50, 16 November 2020 (UTC)