Wikipedia:Peer review/Sanja Matsuri/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I just completely overhauled the article taking it from a stub to hopefully a high quality article. I've been staring at it too long to get a constructive review from myself so I need some help!
Thanks! Torsodog (talk) 05:44, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
[edit]Some ideas...
- "(present day Tokyo)" - this is related to Edo, not the whole of the previous clause, so perhaps it needs clarification.
- " Kanda Festival and Sanno Festival" - any wikilinks available...
- References should use the {{cite web}} template and not be raw URLs.
- I'd suggest expanding the history section and making it less "in-universe" - for a non-expert it's difficult to go with it all...
- Schedule section should be prose really rather than a bland table.
- Not clear about the relevance of the external links, check WP:EL to ensure that the links really comply.
Not much more to say, there's a chance for GA, but FA is a long way off right now... The Rambling Man (talk) 19:09, 16 March 2008 (UTC)