Wikipedia:Peer review/South Park (season 1)/archive3
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I've listed this article for peer review because I was wondering what is missing before getting it to FAC.
Thanks, Nergaal (talk) 04:19, 15 December 2011 (UTC)
- Comments from AJona1992
- File:SouthPark season1.jpg remove the extra/empty "summary"
- FN#1 and FN#2 is it MSN or MSN.com
- FN#3 wikilink Creators Syndicate
- FN#4 wikilink IGN
- FN#23 publisher? (Time division of Time Warner) also wikilink Entertainment Weekly
- Be consistent in weather you provide locations for newspapers, compare FN#24 and FN#26.
- FN#24 wikilink Orlando Sentinel
- FN#33 publisher? (Condé Nast Publications)
- FN#35 wikilink BBC News
- What makes this a reliable source? this?, this?, this?
- FN#50, 51 and 52 why does it say "Amazon.com"? Did Amazon distribute the DVDs?
Hope this helps, someone else will review the prose. Happy holidays, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 19:09, 15 December 2011 (UTC)
- Sweet! I will fix these over the weekend. Nergaal (talk) 17:10, 16 December 2011 (UTC)