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Sumatra (chicken)

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I've listed this article for peer review because I am doing this for an English project. Please review the editing and anything else you think may need changing.

Thanks, Poultrygirl (talk) 04:29, 18 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

SGGH

I suggest:

Overall, it needs more information all round. As per WP:LEAD the main points of this information can be summarized in the opening paragraphs, and then the rest goes in each section.

Characteristics section contains physical attributes, but can also contain roosting habits, mating rituals etc. (even if they are generic chicken ones)
You could have a section on use of this species by humans, if there is anything
you need inline citations (using the<ref></ref> templates and a reflist section at the end, see WP:REF for help with this.
your image captions should contain more information than just a brief description, to enhance the usefulness of the caption

All in all, it just needs more information really, hope that helps! SGGH ^speak! 10:50, 21 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]