Wikipedia:Peer review/Surgical Care Affiliates/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because it's a topic I'm interested in, having had medical procedures, and want to ensure it's done right! This is one of my first major edits and I'd love to make it better. Thanks in advance!!!
Thanks, Lisacatherine (talk) 19:55, 2 September 2016 (UTC)
- Sorry for the late review Lisacatherine. The prose in the article looks good but there are still some issues that need to be covered.
- Per WP:Lead there should be between two or four paragraphs.
- Also, remove the references from the lead as according to the guidelines they are used in the body.
- "In 2016, SCA announced its inaugural Physician Advisory Board to provide feedback and direction on SCA's innovation and growth initiatives." Is it sourced?
- Now, the biggest problem I found with this article is the formatting. Depending on the type you can make a "Designated title". Retrieved November 5, 2016.. Additionally, you can add author and date if possible
- Is there a free image you could use?
- Lastly, if you think the prose needs working, submit it to the Wikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors. If you do it, be patient as it can take time.
- I hope I was helpful. Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 02:12, 5 November 2016 (UTC)