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I've listed this article for peer review because of a possible FA nomination.
Thanks, elmasmelih 20:55, 16 August 2014 (UTC)
- Here are my suggestions. Hope it isn't too late as you opened this a few weeks ago.
- First, check for broken links in the references section using http://dispenser.homenet.org/~dispenser/cgi-bin/webchecklinks.py?page=Turkey . There were a couple dozen broken links that I saw, some of which point to Turkish-language sites.
- 2.1 Prehistory of Anatolia and Eastern Thrace
- Third paragraph: "eighteenth through the 13th century BC”: be consistent in naming conventions (18th through the 13th)
- Third paragraph: "eighteenth through the 13th century BC”: be consistent in naming conventions (18th through the 13th)
- 5.1 Biodiversity
- Third paragraph: "Polonezköy Nature Park”: add a period at the end of the last sentence
- Third paragraph: "Polonezköy Nature Park”: add a period at the end of the last sentence
- 6 Economy
- Second paragraph: take comma out after Customs Union, add space after comma following “tariff rates”
- Second paragraph: take comma out after Customs Union, add space after comma following “tariff rates”
- 7.1 Religion
- Second paragraph: “some sources” sentence can be reworded to use one of the percentages or as a range (96.4-99.8%)
- Semicolon instead of comma after Diyanet İşleri Başkanlığı)
- 15 to 20 million. and according… replace period with comma
- 7.3 Healthcare
- Could add a little bit more here, but take out the top 3 diseases at the end
- Could add a little bit more here, but take out the top 3 diseases at the end
- 8.1 Arts
- First paragraph: “thirty, forty years” could be something like “thirty to forty years”
- First paragraph: “thirty, forty years” could be something like “thirty to forty years”
- 8.2 Architecture
- First paragraph: "Turkic architectue" to "Turkish architecture" (First word with different suffix, second with corrected spelling)
- First paragraph: "Turkic architectue" to "Turkish architecture" (First word with different suffix, second with corrected spelling)
- I think you should have a good shot at FA once you fix the broken reference links and make the above changes. Good luck! Let me know if you have further questions.
- Also, I have a peer review request for Liberty in North Korea where I would appreciate any feedback. Tonystewart14 (talk) 14:55, 4 September 2014 (UTC)