Wikipedia:Peer review/Yi Ye/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because peer review gives legitimacy to the information listed in the article.
Thanks, Lodzamanei (talk) 11:32, 12 February 2015 (UTC)
- Comments by Ugog Nizdast
I have read through this and honestly, I can't find anything big to point out. You've improved the significantly and looks decently sourced too. Here's what I've managed to find. -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 11:08, 2 March 2015 (UTC)
- In the first section, Early life, both "middle-class" and "Japanese Pirates" are pipe-linked to Chungin and Wokou respectively. From WP:EGG, "make sure that the reader knows what to expect when clicking on a link." Catering to an international audience, it would be better to write it as "chungin (middle-class)". Similar could be done to Wokou, Joseon Tongsinsa, Yangban, Ming Dynasty,
- Article is a bit underlinked. A term is usually linked once in the article with the exception of infoboxes, captions and lead sections. As a reader unfamiliar to this topic, here are some issues which can be solved by introducing new or linking the present terms.
- Early life section: It says he was born in the Goryeo Dynasty. Later its mentioned Joseon. Link Joseon and try to possibly explain when this changed.
- Diplomatic career: Link Tsushima at first mention.
- Could it be linked or explained about King Sejong's coming into power?
- Link Japanese-improved watermill, sugarcane, Korean Buddhist culture and printing technology.
I think this can be a good article nominee, if you're interested in getting this to Good article status. Though once you nominate it, there's a big queue for it and it may take several months before it gets reviewed. So be prepared or focus on working on something else till then. Sincerely, Ugog Nizdast (talk) 11:08, 2 March 2015 (UTC)