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You Lost Me

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I've listed this article for peer review because I listed it for GA and it failed... So I'm planning to do it again, but I want someone to say something about it first. Thanks. Jorn ^talk 21:14, 4 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

OK, I'll give my idea first:

Infobox

The file for "iTunes EP cover" isn't necessary

Lead

Lyrically, the song talks about a cheating man, who has left the protagonist's world view "infected" ---> I think this sentence has a problem
first in a room full of damaged furniture, second in an area filled with charcoal, and thirdly in a blue and white room. ---> first... second... third, not fist... second... thirdly

Composition

Set at 50 beats per minute, it is set in the key of A-minor, and Aguilera's vocal range spans from the low-note of Eb3 to the high-note of E5. ---> has a problem again. Fix it

Still reviewing, those are my first issues. — HĐ (talk) 04:07, 11 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]