Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Russian-Circassian War/archive1

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Russian-Circassian War

Slowly building up the article, and battling against the low number of sources from which non-POV facts can be gleamed. Looking for constructive criticism, but please check back here after making points so you can answer any points I make in return! Thanks SGGH 14:15, 15 April 2007 (UTC)

Incidentally, underwent a peer review here a while ago. SGGH 14:20, 15 April 2007 (UTC)

• Support Carom 01:41, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
• Support. -- FayssalF - ^{Wiki me up ®} 18:25, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
• Support - Nicely written, flows well, a few comments below. - Emt147 ^Burninate! 06:52, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
  • "The date of the outbreak of the conflict is thus debated by a number of historians." -- Needs to be referenced or removed as WP:WEASEL
  • I would abbreviate the names of the Russian generals so they are not wrapping in the infobox. Last name, F. M. is appropriate in Russian or English.
    • "F. M. Lastname" might be less ambiguous here; otherwise, you'll have two commas for each item. Kirill Lokshin 11:53, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
  • The first paragraph of "Events of the war" is completely unreferenced and there are more unreferenced claims throughout that section
  • Seems like the pic of Tsar Nicholas is in a random place on the page

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