Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Deep Throat (The X-Files episode)/archive1
Addressed comments from Crisco 1492
[edit]- Prose comments
- FBI agents Mulder and Scully - Perhaps full names and actors on first use?
- They travel to Idaho -- Mulder and Scully, to avoid the possibility of DT coming with them.
- Got it. GRAPPLE X 00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- "they have been here for a long, long time" - Emphasis in original?
- Arguably yes but I've removed it for tone anyway. GRAPPLE X 00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- "of course" - Is this really needed?
- Guess not. Gone. GRAPPLE X 00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- Associate Director or Deputy Director? Link goes to DD
- The position has since been renamed from Felt's time; he was Associate Director but the modern position is Deputy Director. I could use the redirect Associate Director of the Federal Bureau of Investigation to lessen confusion if you feel it's a good idea. GRAPPLE X 00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- Unnecessary.
- The position has since been renamed from Felt's time; he was Associate Director but the modern position is Deputy Director. I could use the redirect Associate Director of the Federal Bureau of Investigation to lessen confusion if you feel it's a good idea. GRAPPLE X 00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- Aurora Project - Link to Aurora (aircraft)?
- This came up in the GA review; the source doesn't actually identify a specific project beyond "Aurora project" and it was felt at that time to avoid assuming it was that particular aircraft. I assume it is that one, though; I could be persuaded to agree to a link. GRAPPLE X 00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- Well, as Aurora Project has only one US-related topic, and the aircraft resembles the one in the plot... — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:15, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- You make a solid case. Added. GRAPPLE X 01:46, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- Well, as Aurora Project has only one US-related topic, and the aircraft resembles the one in the plot... — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:15, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- Not much from me. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:38, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for your time reviewing this. I've addressed or replied to your concerns. GRAPPLE X 00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- This came up in the GA review; the source doesn't actually identify a specific project beyond "Aurora project" and it was felt at that time to avoid assuming it was that particular aircraft. I assume it is that one, though; I could be persuaded to agree to a link. GRAPPLE X 00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
Addressed comments and source review from TBrandley
[edit]Source review - spotchecks not done
- Fox Home Entertainment should be 20th Century Fox Home Entertainment
- Had it piped; removed the piping to display fully
- "Time, Incf". Typo after inc
- Artefact from ctrl+Fing earlier, oops.
- Actually, Time, Inc shouldn't have that comma
- Fixed both instances to "Time Inc."
- Ref. 22, 24 are missing its publishers
- Got them.
- Ref. 29 should be single quotes ('), not double quotes (")
- Fixed; missed earlier as I forgot to look for double quotes ending, not just beginning a title. GRAPPLE X 02:21, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
TBrandley 02:09, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
Other comments
- Other comments would be very minor, so I just did them myself. Cheers, TBrandley 02:12, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! Fixed up your listed points. GRAPPLE X 02:21, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- No problem. Awesome work! TBrandley 02:23, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! Fixed up your listed points. GRAPPLE X 02:21, 21 August 2012 (UTC)