Talk:Japanese destroyer Nire (1944)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Harrias (talk · contribs) 11:29, 25 June 2020 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this. Harrias ^talk 11:29, 25 June 2020 (UTC)

References

• Consistently formatted in an appropriate style (no action needed).
• What makes combinedfleet.com a reliable source?
  • Run by published authors Anthony Tully and Jon Parshall.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:19, 11 July 2020 (UTC)

Images

• The image license tag says "It was published before January 1, 1957.", but the publication date given in the source is 1994.
  • It's either or, not both.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:23, 11 July 2020 (UTC)
    • Eugh, my bad. I hate image licensing. Harrias ^talk 16:34, 11 July 2020 (UTC)

Prose

• Can you provide a link for "Matsu class" in the Design and description.
• "The ships measured 100 meters (328 ft 1 in) overall.." It's been a while since I've reviewed one of these, is it common to omit "length"?
• "..ordered in Fiscal Year 1944 under.." No need to capitalise fiscal year.
  • My source source treats it like a proper noun.
• "Nire assigned that day.." Missing "was".
  • Oops.

Nothing much else from me, a small and neat article. Harrias ^talk 08:36, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

@Sturmvogel 66: Just a note that this has been on hold for over a week with no progress. Harrias ^talk 07:28, 9 July 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:26, 11 July 2020 (UTC)

All good, passing now. Harrias ^talk 16:34, 11 July 2020 (UTC)