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[edit]@DarjeelingTea: How should I go about your prose maintenance tag? I feel both sections are good in lists (I do agree, though, that two lists is not necessarily aesthetically pleasing). Is the tag talking to both Media Coverage and Districts, or just one?
- I'm not DarjeelingTea -- though I do drink tea -- but in my personal opinion, the media coverage section needs turning into prose in summary style, whereas the Districts part is fine. For some reason, the "reception" sections commonly seen in film articles sprang to my mind when thinking how the media coverage section might be better written. For an example, take a look at Balls Out (2014 film)#Critical reception. A better matching example would be some other innovation (ancient or modern) that received widespread coverage and both praise and criticism, but I can't think of a good example right now. MPS1992 (talk) 20:30, 18 March 2017 (UTC)
- @MPS1992: Thanks, I took care of it. Formal Dude (talk) 22:35, 19 March 2017 (UTC)
- Excellent, thank you. I will do some tweaking of that prose. Or I may forget to do so. MPS1992 (talk) 22:48, 19 March 2017 (UTC)
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